Draft talk:Christoph Hintermüller

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Hi you all (@SafariScribe)

I have updated the article. Would it be possible for you to give me some feedback?

You seem to be criticizing the sources. I have adjusted them again according to the guidelines.

In my opinion, these are all prime sources. So vol the TV appearances are documented with videos that the TV stations themselves have published on YouTube (and these are the largest media stations in Germany). As well as Hintermüller's activity as an author. Any statements made are also backed up by newspaper articles. The AGO (America's largest trade journal for church music) and Musica Sacra (the largest trade journal for church music in Germany) are very reputable sources. All magazine sources come directly from the publishers.

In addition, there is the fact that the special visa categeory in the USA requires an extensive examination. Accordingly, there is also relevant evidence here that Hintermuller is an important church musician of our time and that he performed internationally and not just locally. Thus he also has a strong relevance in the music scene (notability). He is present in reliable sources.

I would be happy to receive feedback on how I can improve the article and the references. JPreisler1987 (talk) 22:49, 22 September 2024 (UTC)

A minor detail in the references: I'm fairly sure that the two parts of Axtmann's name have accidentally been switched. TooManyFingers (talk) 03:39, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

You are right, I changed it. JPreisler1987 (talk) 03:47, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

The best way to improve the sources, in my opinion, is to include far more material in which "third parties" not connected with him give reports about him (especially articles that are not also interviews or announcements). TooManyFingers (talk) 03:46, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

Thats a good advice to ! Thank you! JPreisler1987 (talk) 03:48, 23 September 2024 (UTC)

Provided Proof of Visa

Provided evidence that Hintermuller has a O1 B visa of the United States. This proves by definition that the American authorities have extensively examined that he is considered an artist with extraordinary abilities in the interest of the United States of America. This article therefore fulfills the requirements of Wikipedia:Notability (music) Criteria for musicians and ensembles.

I am always happy to receive further suggestions for improvement! JPreisler1987 (talk) 22:49, 22 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]