Draft talk:LaQuan McGowan

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Sportsfangnome in topic A few critiques about your article

A few critiques about your article

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Remember, assume good faith, this is constructive criticism.

I have looked at your article, and I have noticed a few things off about it, for starters, what is the importance of this article? The reason why an article is made for your favorite player, DK Metcalf, is because he:

  1. Is an important person for the Seattle Seahawks
  2. Is a star WR
  3. Has the NFL record for most receiving yards for a rookie

Now what importance does LaQuan have? All I know is that he was undrafted and that he plays for lower-level teams where he gets cut every 5 seconds.


Next, we have zero stats for this player's blocking, I want to know if this person is good at his job or not, let's use a second Seahawks player for this one, how about center Austin Blythe? It shows here that out of 75 games, he played only 49 of them, so to conclude, he is a mediocre player.


Next, you skip all of his seasons at Baylor! I am in real life, going to press a random article with my mouse, on a random Seattle Seahawks player, and I will see if I can find at least a tidbit of what happened at their college/university.


I got Gabe Jackson, and it is there, it has information, it has stats, it has everything, so if I were you, you either vastly improve this stubby article, or hope and pray that it somehow gets through and becomes an article. Sportsfangnome (talk) 17:24, 14 July 2022 (UTC)Reply

I will help though by making a help wanted sign on my talk page. Sportsfangnome (talk) 17:25, 14 July 2022 (UTC)Reply