Draft talk:Louis René Barrera Indiangrass Wildlife Sanctuary

Autumn 2024 Educational Project Page

This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: [1]https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(October_-_December,_2024) . The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform, have completed mandatory Training for Students, and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student Usernames are:

• XYChief
• LIUCWisshorn24
• LIUCgiovanni
• LBLiuc
• Larrystone77
• Priscilliuc
• EmpireAI

Issues or questions can be referred direct to the users or to their tutor @Limelightangel Limelightangel (talk) 14:09, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Limelightangel (talk) 14:09, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Draft feedback 30/10/24

@XYChief, LIUCWisshorn24, LIUCgiovanni, LBLiuc, Larrystone77, Priscilliuc, and EmpireAI:

• remove the 3 duplicated links in the See Also section. Avoid over-linking and See the guidelines on this section: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Layout/See also section
• remove irrelevant links in the See Also section e.g. outdoor recreation' and understand the purpose of these types of links
• gallery section needs a section heading
• images in gallery need meaningful captions relevant to users of the page and topic e.g. locations: 'Bluebonnets growing in the India Grass Wildlife sanctuary, Texas'. See: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/captions
• references 1 and 2 are to the same source. Use ref name to create a reference that can be used in text multiple times but create only a single final reference for this source. Look at other pages that use this and See:Help:footnotes
• references 1 and 2 are grammatically incorrect: Protected Planet, not 'protected planet'
• note in the page history (>View History>) the large amount of content from @EmpireAI: removed by User:LilianaUwU on 24/10/24 related to copy/paste of automated content
• there is a basic spelling error in the first sentence
• the poorly captioned gallery image 'Vegetation the the Sanctuary's Path' duplicates the image in the Infobox and should be removed
• there is useful factual information on the location of page 35 of ref. 3., available via Google Scholar. If used, create a ref name to avoid duplicating ref. 3 in the references list

Limelightangel (talk) 10:20, 30 October 2024 (UTC)

Draft feedback 5/11/24

@XYChief, LIUCWisshorn24, LIUCgiovanni, LBLiuc, Larrystone77, Priscilliuc, and EmpireAI:

• image captions: make these clear and relevant to the page topic and the text section they accompany. You can add/change captions to display on the page. see: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Captions
• Gallery: needs a section heading
• referening:
  • ref. 6 is incorrect and has a missing suthor
  • ref. 4 has an authoring body
  • refs. 2. 3 and 5 should not be displaying the website URL, just thee website name
• the section on Threats has fundamental issues:
  • it plagiarizes content from the secondary source
  • the style is inappropriate e.g. 'troubling issue casts a shadow'. See relevant section on Vocabularly in Wikipedia:Manual of style
  • the source is poor

Limelightangel (talk) 15:43, 5 November 2024 (UTC)

Invasive species

I was thinking about moving and expanding the part on invasive species under the section "Threats", do you find it reasonable? Priscilliuc (talk) 18:34, 8 November 2024 (UTC)