Draft talk:Marco Brizzi

Response to decline. Rewriting without LLM assistance.

Thank you for the detailed feedback. I'd like to clarify that the draft was written by me and then reviewed and refined with AI assistance, not being aware that this approach conflicts with Wikipedia's guidelines, and I apologize for not disclosing it. I will rewrite the draft substantially in my own words. Regarding the sources: I believe Pippo Ciorra, Lina Malfona, and Mélanie van der Hoorn books and articles provide independent analytical coverage rather than mere mentions, but I recognize the current draft does not make this sufficiently evident. I will revise accordingly, foregrounding these sources more organically within the narrative. I am the subject of this article and have declared my conflict of interest on my user page, in accordance with Wikipedia's COI guidelines. Brizzi Marco (talk) 08:41, 28 June 2026 (UTC)

Revised draft addressing feedback from Paul W (10 July 2026)

Thank you for the detailed feedback. I have revised the draft as follows: inline citations have been added to every paragraph; sources that did not meet Wikipedia's reliability standards have been removed; and sections that could not be adequately supported by independent reliable sources (Teaching, Recognition and advisory roles) have been removed entirely. All remaining inline citations draw from published academic and professional sources: Editori Laterza, Rassegna di Architettura e Urbanistica (Sapienza Università di Roma), MAS Context, Volume, The Architectural Review, Domus, Living–Corriere della Sera, il manifesto, and Dezeen. I have declared my conflict of interest on my user page throughout this process. Brizzi Marco (talk) 10:32, 29 July 2026 (UTC)