Draft talk:May-Li Khoe
Autumn 2024 Educational Project Page
editThis page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: [1]https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(October_-_December,_2024) . The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform, have completed mandatory Training for Students, and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student Usernames are:
- Liucalex01
- Francescoboniotti
- LIUCbenedetta10
- LIUCRiccardo10
- Meister L
- LiucBerti
- LIUCcarola10
Issues or questions can be referred direct to the users or to their tutor @Limelightangel Limelightangel (talk) 14:02, 28 October 2024 (UTC)
Draft feedback 1/11/24
edit@Liucalex01, Francescoboniotti, LIUCbenedetta10, LIUCRiccardo10, Meister L, LiucBerti, and LIUCcarola10:
- note and comply with the guidelines and good practice on lead (introductory) sections and look at good practice other pages. They do not have an 'Introduction'. See: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. Use this to develop this section. See also Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Lead_section.
- there are no sources. Do not add new content without sources. See: Wikipedia:referencing for beginners
- the 3 brief lines have missing punctuation, no structure, incorrect grammar and no sources.
- Needs an Infobox: find a relevant Infobox template from Wikipedia:List of infoboxes and look at Template:Infobox person, and use this templare correctly, or find a similar page with a relevant Infobox, and use this. Note that these are templates with rules on how they are used and for acceptable field content/format