Draft talk:Monte Zovetto

Autumn 2024 Educational Project Page

This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: [1]https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(October_-_December,_2024) . The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform, have completed mandatory Training for Students, and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student Usernames are:

• LIUCsmarties
• LIUCemmi05
• Liuclucy008
• Liucedoardo08
• Liucmarti08
• Ascanio10
• bodinsky

Issues or questions can be referred direct to the users or to their tutor @Limelightangel Limelightangel (talk) 14:02, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

Feedback 1/11/24

@LIUCsmarties, LIUCemmi05, Liuclucy008, Liucedoardo08, Liucmarti08, Ascanio10, and Bodinsky:

• text has been inserted above the draft banner tag. This tag needs to be moved to the top of the page:
• remove the inappropriate text 'Article draft' 'History paragraph'
• referencing: the single reference is incorrect, not linked to any content and to an unacceptable source. See Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners
• images and referencing: images are not referenced
• images: any image needs a caption and page position relevant to both the topic and the page section where it is located
• note and comply with the guidelines and good practice on lead (introductory) sections and look at good practice other pages. They do not have an 'Introduction'. See: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. Use this to develop this section. See also Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Lead_section.
• Needs an Infobox: find a relevant Infobox template from Wikipedia:List of infoboxes and look at Template:Infobox mountain, and use this templare correctly, or find a similar page with a relevant Infobox, and use this. Note that these are templates with rules on how they are used and for acceptable field content/format
• note the text and reference 2 relared to WW1:
  • it uses the correct reference format for a book
  • it uses an authorative reference
  • it embeds links out to relevant existing page for this content
  • it uses markup to create a Wikipedia:piped link to pages on 157th Infantry Regiment "Liguria", 36th Infantry Division "Forlì" and 64th Infantry Division "Catanzaro", without showing these page titles in the displayed linked text. See: Wikipedia:Piped_link

Limelightangel (talk) 16:42, 1 November 2024 (UTC)