Draft talk:Palio di Castellanza

Latest comment: 3 days ago by Kassik27 in topic Feedback 1/11/24

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This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: [1]https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(October_-_December,_2024) . The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform, have completed mandatory Training for Students, and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student Usernames are:

  • pinoyagent11
  • LIUC11sofie
  • LoreP12345
  • Kishirot
  • Georgeliuc11
  • Kassik27
  • SpriteMedicina

Issues or questions can be referred direct to the users or to their tutor @Limelightangel Limelightangel (talk)

Feedback 1/11/24

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@Pinoyagent11, LIUC11sofie, LoreP12345, Kishirot, Georgeliuc11, Kassik27, and SpriteMedicina:

  • text has been inserted above the draft banner tag. This tag needs to be moved to the top of the page: AfC submission|t||ts=20241025154652|u=LIUC11sofie|ns=118|demo=}}
  • note the guidelines and good practice on lead (or introductory) sections, and look at good practice on other pages. See: Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section. Use this to develop this section. See also Wikipedia:Writing_better_articles#Lead_section.
  • the first sentence is in Italian and needs fixing
  • other related festivals section needs to embed any relevant links to other pages e.g. to Palio di Siena
  • Needs an Infobox: find a relevant Infobox template from Wikipedia:List of infoboxes and Template:Infobox recurring event, and use this templare correctly, or find a similar page with a relevant Infobox, and use this. Note that these are templates with rules on how they are used and for acceptable field content/format
  • there are no references for any of the limited content. Don't add content without sources.

Limelightangel (talk) 15:38, 1 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

Template:Infobox recurring event, I don't really understand, should we insert the infobox in the draft? Kassik27 (talk) 18:45, 2 November 2024 (UTC)Reply