Draft talk:Tulunid Emirate

Feedback

Magedsaleh392, here is some feedback (from a non-Afc reviewer) for you:

The number one issue is that this article appears to cover the same topic a the mainspace article Tulunids, or at least greatly overlaps it. Try the search box at H:YFA#Search for an existing article, for example, and type Tulunid Emirate into the box. Result #2 is Tulunids.

Other issues exist, but need not be looked at in this Draft, if it is a duplicate topic. However, it may be useful to you going forward. The main one concerns translated author names and titles in the citations. While it is very helpful for an English (or Latin alphabet-using) readership to use English romanization of author names, and English translation of titles (which should be in citation param {{{trans-title}}}) it hurts WP:Verifiability to remove the actual author's name, and title, as given in the original source, and makes it harder to find the source. (Presence of ISBN somewhat mitigates the problem for 22 of the 142 sources; so does|doi= (one case) and so would |oclc= (none) if it were added; but it is still better to retain thh originals as well.) See also the Meta instructions Talk page. Mathglot (talk) 16:58, 5 September 2024 (UTC)