Talk:École supérieure des sciences commerciales d'Angers

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Stfg in topic Clarification request

Clarification request

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"In parallel to its change of location in Angers with the campus move to Belle-Beille, ..." Does this mean that the Angers campus changed to Belle-Beille from something else, or what? If it means that, a clearer way to write it would be "At the same time as the Angers campus was transferred to Belle-Beille, ...". --Stfg (talk) 09:53, 23 July 2012 (UTC)Reply

Tone?

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It would be nice if the article sounded like an enciclopedic one instead of the official brochure from the school.