Talk:Đuro Bago

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Peasreach77 in topic Needs work

Needs work

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I went through and edited this page for grammar and that stuff. It appears as if it was directly translated from the Croatia wikipedia, and some of the sentences just did not make sense to me. I also did not change any of the quotes to make them sound better. This article could use the help of a person familiar with this topic.MilkStraw532 (talk) 19:46, 25 October 2011 (UTC)Reply
I was having trouble with the quotes as well. There is obviously a translation issue there. Also, under Eduardo's section, there is a dialogue that could easily just be summarized instead of how it is. Cleanelephant (talk) 22:55, 14 December 2011 (UTC)Reply
I beefed up the grammar, punctuation and all that good stuff as best I could, so I removed the copyedit tag. I'm going to see if I can't clean up those external links and add some references later. Peasreach77 (talk) 15:40, 4 February 2012 (UTC)Reply
Well two of the three external links are broken now. Should they be removed? I was only able to add one reference. Someone who speaks Croatian might have better luck. Peasreach77 (talk) 19:30, 4 February 2012 (UTC)Reply