Talk:Šērūʾa-ēṭirat/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 05:52, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:52, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

GA Criteria
GA Criteria: 1 1.a Y 1.b Y 2 2.a Y 2.b Y 2.c Y 2.d Y 3 3.a Y 3.b Y 4 4.a Y 5 5.a Y 6 6.a Y 6.b Y

• No DAB links Y
• No dead links Y
• No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

• She is the only one of Esarhaddon's daughters who is known by name and inscriptions listing the royal children suggest that she outranked several of her brothers in importance; outranking younger male children such as Ashur-mukin-paleya but ranking behind the crown princes Ashurbanipal and Shamash-shum-ukin. suggest She is the only one of Esarhaddon's daughters to be known by name and inscriptions listing the royal children suggest that she outranked several of her brothers, such as her younger brothers Ashur-mukin-paleya, but below the crown princes Ashurbanipal and Shamash-shum-ukin.
• daughter and also reprimands her for not doing her homework. no suggestion here, just thought this was funny.

Yeah, I love her letter too :) Ichthyovenator (talk) 15:12, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Biography

• Esarhaddon, who reigned as king of Assyria 681–669 BC suggest Esarhaddon, who reigned as king of Assyria from 681–669 BC
• Ashur-etel-shame-erseti-muballissu have an ongoing theory that civilizations with super long names are predestined to rapid collapses when everyone gets tired of pronouncing the names.

Very possible. Certainly happened with the Byzantines as well (who in their right mind names their child John Doukas Angelos Palaiologos Raoul Laskaris Tornikes Philanthropenos Asen?). Ichthyovenator (talk) 15:12, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

• gives Serua-eterat a central role in the negotiations before the civil war started, c. 652 BC suggest gives Serua-eterat a central role in the negotiations before the civil war started around 652 BC
• @Ichthyovenator: That is all my suggestions passing now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 11:18, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

@Iazyges: Blazing through these! Thank you again, implemented all suggestions. Ichthyovenator (talk) 15:12, 15 April 2020 (UTC)