Talk:(sic)nesses

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Jacoblikesmetal in topic Disc 1
Good article(sic)nesses has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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October 29, 2010Peer reviewReviewed
March 4, 2011Good article nomineeListed
Current status: Good article

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(sic)nesses requires more information. First, I would like a volunteer to complete the Credits/Personnel section of the article by adding the Director, Producers etc. Kevon100 Talk! If you're ❺❺❺ then I'm ❻❻❻ 14:06, 19 October 2010 (UTC)Reply

Sure, i'll help you out. Done as you requested, if there are any mistakes fix them ofcourse! Grey Matter (talk) 14:16, 19 October 2010 (UTC)Reply
  Done Thank you Grey Matter Kevon100 Talk! If you're ❺❺❺ then I'm ❻❻❻ 17:13, 19 October 2010 (UTC)Reply

Charts

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Another request, several websites including this have stated (sic)nesses charted in other nations in the Top 5 and Top 10. While I was only able to find that it charted at No. 3 in Germany, I am having difficulties in finding the other charts. Help will be appreciated if the other charts can be found and added to the article. Thank you in Advance. Kevon100 Talk! If you're ❺❺❺ then I'm ❻❻❻ 17:02, 19 October 2010 (UTC)Reply

Topic

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The topic on the discography will be demoted if this is not GANed before Dec 27. Nergaal (talk) 22:24, 10 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:24, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • "The double-disc release features a recording of their headlining performance at the 2009 Download Festival along with a 45-minute behind the scenes documentary created by percussionist Shawn Crahan, and the four music videos from All Hope Is Gone." - comma after Festival, and link music video
  • "and it included free giveaways" - not mentioned later
  • If you are going to mention individual reviews in the lead I think you should cite them here.
  • Why? they're not quotations, and quotes are generally the only things required to have references in the lead.
  • Expand the lead to include charts
  • Release date and genres are in infobox, but not in body
  • There have been SEVERAL discussions on whether putting genres like nu metal and alternative metal and it always comes down to weather or not sources list them as that genre, and allmusic refers to most of the songs (both live and studio) to be either nu metal or alternative metal, and the whole (sic)nesses page ([1]) lists it as heavy metal.
  • Not good to start the body with "It"
  • Comma after "Shawn Crahan stated that"
  • Indicate that Gray was a member of the band
  • "Shawn Crahan attended the New York event" - don't need his first name again
  • Album title in Crahan's quote should be italicised
  • "The DVD was released on September 28, 2010 sold 9,300 copies" - missing word
  • Link and italicse Billboard
  • Why are other charts not mentioned in prose?
  • As is, there really isn't enough information on the entry date and entry position and stuff, so the prose would be very bland… I think in the future the sites will update it to include that stuff, but that may be way off. CrowzRSA 21:16, 4 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • Would the music videos not start at chapter 19?
  • The DVD doesn't list them as 19-22. I figured that it was intended that they were separate track listings, and that they deserved separate number listings… CrowzRSA 02:00, 3 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
  • How about "legal names" instead of "real names"?
  • Is there a reason that the band members are in descending order? Ascending would seem more logical.
  • Italicise album title whenever it occurs
  • The Charts and certifications table is a bit confusing, as it kinda implies that the Top Music Video Chart is responsible for the certification, when Billboard do not have anything to do with certs

On hold now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:24, 2 March 2011 (UTC)Reply

I am satisfied with improvements. Passing now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:48, 4 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
Thanks, CrowzRSA 16:13, 6 March 2011 (UTC)Reply
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--JeffGBot (talk) 04:27, 31 May 2011 (UTC)Reply

Disc 1

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Can anyone confirm that disc 1 contains a Paul Gray interview because I bought the DVD and can't find it at all.--Jacoblikesmetal (talk) 11:36, 9 November 2012 (UTC)Reply