Talk:...Thirteen Years Later/GA1
Latest comment: 10 years ago by Grapple X in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 15:13, 5 July 2014 (UTC)
Just three minor issues:
- Perhaps begin the second paragraph of the lead with 'In this episode...' for clarity
- "The episode has evoked..." "It has evoked"
- Wikilink ‘1997–98 television season’ under note
A well written article. No dead links or dabs and could find no close-paraphrasing issues. Will pass once comments have been addressed. Lemonade51 (talk) 15:13, 5 July 2014 (UTC)
Completed. DepressedPer (talk) 19:23, 5 July 2014 (UTC)
- Sweet, happy to pass now. Lemonade51 (talk) 20:56, 5 July 2014 (UTC)
- Late getting to this—thanks to you both for the review and the fixes! GRAPPLE X 18:27, 8 July 2014 (UTC)
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