Talk:10 (MercyMe album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 22:38, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
edit- Since the album cover images requires an alt description, please fill in the currently unused parameter
- "Recorded" parameter: "2001—2009" --> "2001–09"
Lead
editParagraph 1
edit- "Released on April 7, 2009 in commemoration of the tenth anniversary of the band's song "I Can Only Imagine"." --> I would state "single" instead: "Released on April 7, 2009 in commemoration of the tenth anniversary of the band's single "I Can Only Imagine"."
- "...as well as a re-recording of "I Can Only Imagine" featuring the London Sessions Orchestra and two other bonus tracks." --> "...as well as a re-recording of "I Can Only Imagine" featuring the London Sessions Orchestra, in addition to two other bonus tracks."
Paragraph 2
edit- Please link "music critics" to its respective article "Music journalism"
Background
edit- Again: "10 was released to commemorate the tenth anniversary of MercyMe's song "I Can Only Imagine".[2]" --> "10 was released to commemorate the tenth anniversary of MercyMe's single "I Can Only Imagine".[2]"
- "The band was initially against the idea - according to Millard, they felt it had always meant a band was near the end of their career." --> "The band was initially against the idea, and according to Millard, they felt it had always meant a band was near the end of their career."
Content
editMusic
edit- "10 includes fifteen songs: twelve of the band's number-one singles[2]" --> Number one on what chart?
- "Live versions of 10 of the band's songs were also included on some versions of the album.[6][7]" --> "Live versions of ten of the band's songs were also included on some versions of the album.[6][7]" (To be consistent since you spelt out the other numbers in the previous sentences.)
Video
edit- Shouldn't the section's title be Videos, not Video?
- Rest is great
Release and commercial performance
edit- Good! :)
Critical reception
edit- In the Professional ratings box: "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
- In the Professional ratings box, please italicize The Baylor Lariat
- "Allmusic" --> "AllMusic"
- "he also praised the one-camera tour videos, but noted "Ten Simple Rules" as being "not their brightest musical moment".[8]" --> "he also praised the one-camera tour videos, but noted "Ten Simple Rules" is "not their brightest musical moment".[8]"
Track listing
edit- "(Credits taken from album liner notes)[5]" --> You can remove this altogether since it is directly below
Personnel
edit- "(Credits taken from album liner notes)[5]" --> "Credits taken from album's liner notes.[5]"
End of GA Review:
editGreat work again! Just some slight changes and fixes before passing. Please let me know if you need anything while doing this, I'd be glad to help! On hold for seven days! Good luck and thanks! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 02:46, 25 June 2016 (UTC).