Talk:11001001/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 22:08, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

Your articles are always fairly quick to review, I'll take this so you don't have to wait too long. ★★RetroLord★★ 22:08, 8 March 2013 (UTC)

Well assuming I don't find anything else i'll pass this article tommorow. Thanks ★★RetroLord★★ 12:02, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.
2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
	2c. it contains no original research.
3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	"It was the first occasion where actor Jonathan Frakes had the opportunity to play the trombone on the series" This is as far as I can see the only problem, is this neccessary to the article? I guess not, it might be a bit trivia-ish, so I've removed it. It'd probably be better off appearing in the episode where Minuet re-appears as the trombone playing features as a plot point there rather than something a bit throw away here. Miyagawa (talk) 11:20, 9 March 2013 (UTC)
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.