Talk:15th Cavalry Division (United States)
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Gog the Mild in topic Suggested improvements
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Suggested improvements
editI have just completed the B class checklist and believe that this article would be improved by addressing the following:
- referencing: each paragraph requires at least one in line citation for a B class
- images and infobox
- copy edit for grammar
- more distinct structure, including an introduction that summarises the entire article
- more content, and improved narrative - including conflicts that the Division has fought in, etc.
Just a few suggestions. Hope this helps. AustralianRupert (talk) 11:46, 28 March 2009 (UTC)
- What does "(including trains)" mean?
- The lead mentions two regiments serving in France. The article has them moving to a transit camp, then leaves them there. Could just what happened to these parts of the division be clarified? Gog the Mild (talk) 15:40, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
- Rephrased. Trains is a WWI term for the supply and medical units.Kges1901 (talk) 18:53, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
- Well, well. "Everyday is a school day." Thanks. Gog the Mild (talk) 21:48, 26 August 2018 (UTC)