Talk:17th Mechanized Corps (Soviet Union)
Latest comment: 8 years ago by Kges1901 in topic Overly technical?
A fact from 17th Mechanized Corps (Soviet Union) appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 29 August 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
|
This article is rated B-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
|
Overly technical?
edit"On 7 July the corps' strength returns showed no armored vehicles." I'm not sure what this means at all. What are "strength returns"? The Rambling Man (talk) 21:29, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: A document explaining the strength of the corps, i.e. how much equipment it had. Kges1901 (talk) 21:39, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- Could we expand on that in the article? I don't believe that "corps' strength returns" (unless linked) is sufficiently understandable to our general readers.... The Rambling Man (talk) 21:48, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Clarified the sentence. Kges1901 (talk) 23:26, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- Could we expand on that in the article? I don't believe that "corps' strength returns" (unless linked) is sufficiently understandable to our general readers.... The Rambling Man (talk) 21:48, 28 August 2016 (UTC)