Talk:17th Special Operations Squadron
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Dead link
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 01:58, 5 December 2017 (UTC)
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- Is "airland" a word?
- What about "beddown"?
- Hawkeye7 (discuss) 01:58, 5 December 2017 (UTC)
- Both are US military terms. Beddown is the "execution of a basing action" per AFI 10-503. Airland is the coordination of air and ground forces in battle. Kges1901 (talk) 02:05, 5 December 2017 (UTC)
- All good then. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 05:04, 5 December 2017 (UTC)
- Both are US military terms. Beddown is the "execution of a basing action" per AFI 10-503. Airland is the coordination of air and ground forces in battle. Kges1901 (talk) 02:05, 5 December 2017 (UTC)
Vietnam era patch
editThe squadron apparently did not have an approved emblem during the Vietnam War. Endicott, Judy G. (1998). Active Air Force Wings as of 1 October 1995 and USAF Active Flying, Space, and Missile Squadrons as of 1 October 1995 (PDF). Air Force History and Museums Program. Washington, DC: Office of Air Force History. p. 455. ASIN B000113MB2. Retrieved July 2, 2014. (listing 1943, 1990 and 1993 emblems). The depicted patch appears to be no more than a morale patch, and I doubt it should be displayed in the infobox as if it were an approved emblem, or alternatively a source cited to indicate that it was used as a squadron emblem (not just as a morale patch), although not officially approved. --Lineagegeek (talk) 14:49, 3 May 2018 (UTC)
- I have moved the patch into the body; it was apparently actually used by the squadron on its HQ. Kges1901 (talk) 21:25, 3 May 2018 (UTC)
Citations
editI believe the authors of materiel from the voloumes Craven and Cate edited need to be credited in the citations to their work. (Rohfleisch, Mortenson, Futrell and Cate). I'm not familiar with the citation template used here, or I'd do it. --Lineagegeek (talk) 19:41, 3 May 2018 (UTC)