Talk:181st Street station (IRT Broadway–Seventh Avenue Line)/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:31, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• Short description goes to the top of the article.
• Add alt text to every image being used.
• Add a comma after "over the Washington Bridge".
• "and to the development" - is "to" necessary?
• Add "the" before "sparsely populated".
• "area to a growing" → "area into a growing"
• Remove the comma after "50 percent complete".
• Remove the comma after "service at the station".
• "these fleet" - sounds weird, reword
• Remove the comma after "conventional bombs".
• "providing protection" → "protecting"
• Add "the" before "M3 bus service".
• "footbridge and southern elevator bank was" → "footbridge and southern elevator bank were"
• Wikilink Jim Dwyer (journalist), Sewell Chan, and Jo Piazza.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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@Some Dude From North Carolina: Thanks. I have resolved these issues now. Epicgenius (talk) 21:41, 9 July 2021 (UTC)