Talk:1854 Atlantic hurricane season

Latest comment: 11 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review

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Expansion and cleanup. Base it off of the GA's 1851 and 1852. ♬♩ Hurricanehink (talk) 01:07, 2 November 2008 (UTC)Reply

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 19:05, 15 July 2013 (UTC)Reply

  • " Operationally, another was believed to have existed near Galveston, Texas in September" - operationally means at the time, for some sort of warning center. There weren't any warning centers back in 1854. I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. Maybe "at one time, another..."?
  • " Hurricane Four caused 4 deaths and approximately $20,000 (1854 USD)" - two things. First, spell out numbers less than ten, and you don't say what anything about the dollars. It just says the storm caused $20,000. Was it in damage? In lottery tickets? :P ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:05, 15 July 2013 (UTC)Reply
  • "and strengthened into a hurricane about 12 hours" - I think a "later" is missing somewhere.
  • "Peaking with maximum sustained winds 80 mph (130 km/h)" - this was 1854. How did they estimate those winds?
  • "Many buildings lost their roofs or were moved by the winds" - was this in Brazos? Or along the coast in general.
  • Can you link "Lavaca"?
  • "which is about 565 miles (909 km)" - watch for unit rounding
  • "A sustained wind speed of 70 mph (110 km/h) was recorded" - was it?
  • Was H4's pressure directly recorded?
  • Any more info on H4's damage? Maybe do a Google news search? (crazy, but GN does go back that far) Or, try finding a database that has TC impacts for South Carolina, North Carolina, and/or Virginia. We have each of those somewhere around the site (project resources)
  • "About 110 acres" - convert to hectares, or some metric equivalent.
  • "the storm persisted until dissipating over Grimes County, Texas on September 20" - do you need the exact county name? Storms are not a point.
  • Link "yellow fever"
  • The second sentence of TS 5 has an unclear antecedent.

All in all, pretty good for 1854! ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:05, 15 July 2013 (UTC)Reply