Talk:18 Miles Out

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 20:35, 10 March 2012 (UTC)

Issues:

• Picture: Give the screenshot a better rationale.
  • Should be good. If it needs to be changed, please notify.
• Intro: "The episode features the climax of Rick and Shane, in which the two men ensue in a fight." Change to "The episode features a climactic exchange between Rick and Shane, wherein two men engage in a fight.
  •  Done
• Production: Maybe add who directed and wrote the episode?
  •  Done
• Production: "Cameras were utilized at an angle that caused the allusion that the vehicle did hit the actors' legs." Change to "The cameramen filmed the shots at an angle, creating the illusion that the vehicle did hit the actors' legs."
  •  Done

As you can see, only a few small issues. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:44, 10 March 2012 (UTC)

• • Should be good to go. :) —DAP388 (talk) 01:27, 11 March 2012 (UTC)

Looks good!--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:02, 11 March 2012 (UTC)

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Who are these people...?

If you ask me, "18 Miles Out" was the worst episode of the Walking Dead (at this point in the series). It was cliche, routine, and unimportant to the main story. The whole "My name is Beth and I have no acting ability please pay attention to me" subplot was f**king pathetic. Her suicide attempt was pure attention-seeking. I say this as someone who knows intimately what it's like to want to kill yourself. And the main plot of "let's leave this kid here where we think it's safe and OOPS there's more walkers than we can handle" was little more than pointless action-packed fluff. And yet...
Somehow this episode received near universal critical acclaim. I call Shenanigans. I've never heard of any of the critics mentioned in the "critical response" section. If any of them have Wikipedia articles attached to their names, the links are absent on this article. These people mentioned have no more credibility than you or I.
'Nuff said. — Preceding unsigned comment added by StoplookingatmyIPaddress (talk • contribs) 07:12, 25 November 2012 (UTC)

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