Talk:1921 Atlantic hurricane season

Latest comment: 5 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 14:18, 2 March 2019 (UTC)Reply


Will get to later this weekend. YE Pacific Hurricane 14:18, 2 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

  • "The 1921 Atlantic hurricane season featured the Tampa Bay hurricane, the most recent major hurricane to strike the Tampa Bay Area in Florida. " why mention Tampa Bay twice? I feel like you could accomplish the same goal in just one sentence ie "The 1921 Atlantic hurricane season featured the most recent major hurricane to strike the Tampa Bay Area in Florida. " YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • "The strongest hurricane of the season, the Tampa Bay hurricane, peaked as a low-end Category 4 with winds of 140 mph (220 km/h). Throughout Florida, the hurricane left about $10 million (1921 USD) in damage and eight deaths." why the tampa Bay bit? It's not something we usually do. YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)Reply
  • "However, by three hours later, the hurricane transitioned into an extratropical cyclone about 400 mi (640 km) southeast of Newfoundland. " you can likely shorten this a bit via "Three hours later, however, the hurricane transitioned into an extratropical cyclone about 400 mi (640 km) southeast of Newfoundland." YE Pacific Hurricane 00:01, 20 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

I'm done with everything. Thanks for the review! Must have been a really long weekend :P --12george1 (talk) 03:56, 21 March 2019 (UTC)Reply