Talk:1965 San Diego Chargers season

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Harper J. Cole in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 14:29, 10 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:29, 10 July 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • Images appropriately licensed. A few more would be good, if possible
  • Links are needed for touchdown, field goal and other game-specific terms. Link on first use only.
  • from 10–3 behind change behind to deficit
  • Spell out the meaning of terms like 3rd and 25 on first use
  • has 2 100-yard receivers had and spell out 2 to minimize confusion with the 100-yard
  • Alworth 20-yard possessive missing--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:16, 9 August 2023 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks; I've added an extra image now. Touchdown and field goal are now linked for their first use, with the exception that I haven't linked touchdown where it appears in the lead (we're meant to use links sparingly in the lead, as I understand it). I've linked 3rd and 25 to an article explaining that terminology, and fixed the typos. Harper J. Cole (talk) 21:46, 12 August 2023 (UTC)Reply