Talk:1993 Football League First Division play-off final/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 17:52, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
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Lead
edit- 1994-94 season should be 1993–94 season
- Taylor and Thompson should have their first names included on the first mention
- Wikilink Chelsea to Chelsea F.C.
- Wikilink penalty to Penalty kick (association football)
- Perhaps wikilink the mention of the word Premiership in the third paragraph to 1994–95 FA Premier League?
Route to the final
edit- "Maskell equalised before Swindon took Hoddle" - I'm not sure what the bold text is trying to say; perhaps a little rewording is in order?
- Removed "Swindon took". The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 19:58, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- "It was the only goal of the game with the match ending 1–0." - how about It was the only goal of the match with it ending 1–0.
Background
edit- "which was played over two legs had ended 2–2, and had played in the second tier since that promotion." - close repetition of the term "played"
- "the club's promotion was overturned by the Football League as a result of financial irregularities, and the club" - close repetition of the word "club"
- Repeat removed. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:00, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
Summary
edit- "from Maskell found Hoddle who shot was curled" - whose
- "Mitchell then saw his shot smothered" - by whom?
- Source doesn't say. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:02, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
Post-match
edit- Wikilink the final mention of the term Premiership in this section to 1994–95 FA Premier League
- "Eurosport listed the match as 94th best association football match" - close repetition of the same word as highlighted in bold
- "as 94th best association football match" - as the 94th
References
edit- All The Guardian sources should include the
|via=Newspapers.com field - Every BNA reference should be marked with
|url-access=subscription - Reference 30 is missing the publication date
- Not sure that's true, perhaps it was fixed after your review? The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- I was referring to the Eurosport source that's now been deleted. Since it has bee removed, this point is no longer than issue. MWright96 (talk) 05:43, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 19:08, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 thanks so much for your review, I've addressed and responded to all of your comments above. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 05:43, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 thanks so much for your review, I've addressed and responded to all of your comments above. The Rambling Man (Stay indoors, stay safe!!!!) 20:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)