Talk:1998 Yeosu submersible incident
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editI have just completed the B class checklist and feel that this article could be improved by addressing the following:
- Referencing: a clearer list of references could be added, also in-line citations could be used to help the verification process (essential for a successful B class rating);
- Grammar: the article needs a copy edit for grammar, also a copy edit against the WP:MOS. E.g. two different styles of dates are used in the article.
- Structure: the addition of a Notes, References, See also and External links sections might help add details/supporting materials to the article.
Just a few ideas. Once you feel it is ready, you might like to seek re-assessment by including the article name on the list at WP:MHA. Also, if you would like more detailed feedback, this can be obtained by including the article on the list at WP:MHPR. Hope this helps. AustralianRupert (talk) 06:55, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
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edit- Was this officially called a ‘Battle’. Seems to be a bit of an overstatement. Incident might be a better word. Chwyatt (talk) 07:33, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
Battle?
editAs mentioned above, "Battle" is pushing it a bit; the two articles in the See Also list were bigger affairs, yet were only termed "incidents". Unless there are any objections I would propose to move this page to Yeosu incident. Thoughts? Xyl 54 (talk) 01:13, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
PS: The same probably goes for the other post-armistice engagements listed in the naval engagements template. Three of them are titled "Battle", but none of them were more than a skirmish. Xyl 54 (talk) 01:18, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
- I boldly changed the name to make it more like other similar incidents. Mztourist (talk) 04:00, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
Updating
editI viewed the Korean version of this page, and it provides additional sources and details. I've translated the Korean article into English and am in the process of verifying sources. There's a few other online archives that I have in mind that might have a bit more information. I intend to overhaul this page as soon as I feel comfortable with my draft and the sources. I've been itching to research and write something and this was the first Korea-related page I saw that was listed as needing some work. Irojyo (talk) 02:39, 26 September 2021 (UTC)