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editReview #1
Your article is very detailed but I would check the grammar under the first and third section. Additionally, I think the physical properties section may just fit better under the Chembox section or maybe you could describe what some of those properties are in a paragraph form. I am also confused about what the use limit in food section and the picture of the MS spectrum. If you explain that stuff, everything else is really good!
Nknelso2 (talk) 23:21, 1 November 2012 (UTC)Nicole Nelson
Review #2
Great detail in your synthesis section, very thorough information. You might want to try and mess around with the formatting though to make those pictures not all in a vertical line, it looks a little strange. Your chembox also looks great. Your other sections need some more info though before they're complete, and your references section has some formatting issues. Overall though, good article.
Zack Gaertner
Gaertne2 (talk) 01:20, 2 November 2012 (UTC)
Review #3
Try linking your references with HTML tags, such as <ref.>insert reference here</ref.> (the actualy tags don't have a period). This will put a nice in-text citation on your page. Also, the pictures don't have to be in a gallery; you can specify the size of the picture in your code. To your Chembox, you could include an external MSDS and safety information. Those are easy additions. Perhaps you could include a section for the IR and NMR spectra to add to your MS spectrum. Another section you could include is general reactions that this compound can participate in.
Madnessxyz (talk) 01:49, 2 November 2012 (UTC) Rahul Gogia, NetID: gogia2
Review #4
The chembox and the synthesis part are very informative and include a lot of useful information. I also like the idea of putting a lot of images into your page, but it would be much better if you could rearrange those photos in an ordered manner so that reader could read them more easily. I would also suggest that you write your physical properties and use limit in food part in a paragraph instead of a bullet point form, as it makes the page more formal. I would also add more sections to your page so that the page is more informative and useful. In an overall view, good page!
Mgieuw (talk) 04:19, 2 November 2012 (UTC) Matthew Gieuw NETID: gieuw2