Talk:2002 LG Cup (snooker)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 12:09, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Prose

Lede

• Grand Prix snooker tournament - reword to avoid WP:SEAOFBLUE. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:52, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• Short description? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:52, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• Maybe worth mentioning it was called the LG cup as it was sponsored by LG. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:52, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• 150/1 outsider - don't start a sentence with a number Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:52, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
• Might be worth mentioning that Small retired due to the disease just three years after this. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:52, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Done all MWright96 (talk) 08:05, 9 July 2021 (UTC)

General

• which was won by Peter Ebdon, his first victory in the event and the world number 3.[ - this sentence doesn't make sense written this way round. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:37, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
• The winners of round 1 went (either round one, or round 1, not both) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:37, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
• On that note, is it round one, two etc, or last 48, last 32, last 16 etc? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:37, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
• You'll have to do flagathlete for the last 32 as well, as there are flags not in the first round (see Quinten Hann). Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:37, 11 July 2021 (UTC)
  • All done MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 11 July 2021 (UTC)

Review meta comments

• I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 12:09, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
  • @Lee Vilenski: Have addressed each of the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 11 July 2021 (UTC)