Talk:2003 Macau Grand Prix

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:38, 20 July 2018 (UTC)Reply


I'll give this one a read-through now. Courcelles (talk) 16:38, 20 July 2018 (UTC)Reply

  • "The overall winner was the driver who completed all 25 laps in the shortest amount of time possible." We can likely lose the word "possible" here.
  • What is a scholarship champion?
  • "avoided using new tyres in the closing seconds" How do you avoid using tires in a matter of seconds?
  • "In the second half an hour session" Needs the word 'practice'
  • "in the shortest amount of time possible" Again, the word possible is not needed.
  • " one of Piquet's shredded" One of his what shredded?
  • "front wing braking and launching into the" Do you mean breaking here?