Talk:2007–08 Sunderland A.F.C. season/GA2

GA Review

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Danny Higginbotham played a key role in the Sunderland defence.

GA review (see here for criteria)

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My god, it is a long article. Congratulations to you on having so much quality information here.

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

   This is a great article, apart from its length. While length is not necessarily a bad thing, there are no pictures to provide relief for the reader, and makes it a struggle to stay focused on the text. Maybe just include some pictures of players, like the one I have included on the right. Obviously better than the one I have on the right, but something along those lines to keep the reader interested. Only other thing I can think of is to just have a quick run through a few more times copyediting. I didn't see any major faults but it never hurts to go over it again. I hope this helps.\ / (⁂) 11:23, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

I've made some requests on flickr to get some relevant images, so far I've uploaded two of them and found and image of Liam Miller. There should be some more being uploaded soon. Thanks. Sunderland06 (talk) 22:58, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Great! Even with the current images, it is a great improvement - I'm passing this GAN. In terms of improvement, try gathering more images, they can't hurt, and do some intense copyediting. Congrats! \ / (⁂) 12:06, 22 November 2008 (UTC)