Talk:2007 Dodge Dealers 400/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 01:33, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

Will review this one as well . Kpgjhpjm 01:33, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

• Hamlin held the first position to Hamlin held the lead .
• Remove the words for the lead
• Kurt Busch led on which laps and Kenseth passed whom to take the lead ?
• Change three practice session to three practice sessions
• Change in the qualifier to in qualifying
• Weird sentence - Kyle Busch was thirteenth, and recorded the nineteenth fastest lap .
• What is meant by staggered his pit stop ?
• Change in the center of turn two to in the middle of turn two
• The Kyle Petty caution sentence could be reworded for better flow
• In the lead it is mentioned Kenseth retook the lead on lap 98 , but in the race section it is written lap 99 . Which one is correct ?
• Kurt Busch had worn tyres , did Edwards make a pit stop or Busch did not pit ?
• Earnhardt was passed by Biffle and Kurt Busch, so how can Biffle pass him 16 laps later if he was already ahead.
• Change McMurray's and Montoya made contact to McMurray and Montoya made contact
• Change contacted Raines to made contact with Raines
• Remove the words at the inside of the track

Comments

• @MWright96: On-hold for now , once these issues are fixed, I will take a final look . Kpgjhpjm 16:03, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
  • @Kpgjhpjm: Have taken action on all of the points raised above so far. MWright96 (talk) 18:16, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
    • @MWright96: There is one typo fort two stops to for two stops

and you didn't fix the Earnhardt -Biffle issue above . When these are fixed , I will be promoting the article. Kpgjhpjm 01:45, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

• @Kpgjhpjm: Hopefully all of the issues have been dealt with. MWright96 (talk) 06:24, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

@Mwright96: Yes , promoting Kpgjhpjm 06:55, 12 August 2018 (UTC)