Talk:2007 Heineken Cup final/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by GhostRiver in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:38, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
I can take a look at this later today! — GhostRiver 14:38, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
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Infobox and lede
edit- "and the first time" → "as well as the first time"
Background
edit- Should probably be specified that it was to "provide a new level of professional cross-border rugby competition"
- "in their respective national leagues"
negotiations between English and French clubs who withdrew from the tournament because of governance
flows better if this longer part is at the end- That part was removed prior to the publication of this full review MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
- Colon after "Tigers won both" for flow
- Reworded differently MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
Route to the final
edit- Subheads should be "London Wasps" and "Leicester Tigers" for parallelism
Wasps
edit- Delink Adams Park, linked above
- Link whitewash
- First sentence of the third paragraph has a lot going on, can probably be split into two
- There are only two paragraphs in total in the London Wasps section MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
Leicester Tigers
edit- Delink Munster in the second sentence
- Split the sentence beginning "They led Bourgoin" in half after "two conversions". Then the next sentence starts "Although Bourgoin scored 10 points", with a comma after "in the second half"
- "and gain entry to the final"
Match
editPre-match
edit- Comma after "The referee for the match was Alan Lewis"
- Delink "referee" per WP:OVERLINK
- Comma after "Alain Rolland and Simon McDowell"
- Comma after "The fourth official was Peter Fitzgibbon"
- "A total of 56,000 tickets"
- Delink Alex King, linked above
First half
edit- Pipe "penalty kick" to Penalty (rugby)
Second half
edit- Comma after "and passed the ball to Smith"
Details
edit- Good
Post-match
edit- "Tigers played worse than Wasps'" → "Wasps outplayed Tigers"
References
edit- [5] appears to be the same reference listed twice
- THey are two different versions with the second featuring fuller details of the game's officiators MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
General comments
edit- All photos are properly licensed and are relevant to the article
- No stability concerns in the revision history
- Earwig score comes up yellow, but that's due to attributed direct quotes
All minor fixes; putting on hold for now, and ping me if there are any questions or when it's ready to be looked over again. — GhostRiver 16:16, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
- @GhostRiver: Have made changes except where I have commented MWright96 (talk) 16:56, 9 October 2021 (UTC)
- Made one more fix myself (I meant second paragraph where I said third, but rather than instituting another back and forth). Passing now. — GhostRiver 20:22, 9 October 2021 (UTC)