Talk:2007 Heineken Cup final/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by GhostRiver in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 14:38, 9 October 2021 (UTC)Reply


I can take a look at this later today! — GhostRiver 14:38, 9 October 2021 (UTC)Reply

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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Infobox and lede

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  • "and the first time" → "as well as the first time"

Background

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  • Should probably be specified that it was to "provide a new level of professional cross-border rugby competition"
  • "in their respective national leagues"
  • negotiations between English and French clubs who withdrew from the tournament because of governance flows better if this longer part is at the end
  • Colon after "Tigers won both" for flow

Route to the final

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  • Subheads should be "London Wasps" and "Leicester Tigers" for parallelism

Wasps

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Leicester Tigers

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  • Delink Munster in the second sentence
  • Split the sentence beginning "They led Bourgoin" in half after "two conversions". Then the next sentence starts "Although Bourgoin scored 10 points", with a comma after "in the second half"
  • "and gain entry to the final"

Match

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Pre-match

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  • Comma after "The referee for the match was Alan Lewis"
  • Delink "referee" per WP:OVERLINK
  • Comma after "Alain Rolland and Simon McDowell"
  • Comma after "The fourth official was Peter Fitzgibbon"
  • "A total of 56,000 tickets"
  • Delink Alex King, linked above

First half

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Second half

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  • Comma after "and passed the ball to Smith"

Details

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  • Good

Post-match

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  • "Tigers played worse than Wasps'" → "Wasps outplayed Tigers"

References

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General comments

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  • All photos are properly licensed and are relevant to the article
  • No stability concerns in the revision history
  • Earwig score comes up yellow, but that's due to attributed direct quotes

All minor fixes; putting on hold for now, and ping me if there are any questions or when it's ready to be looked over again. — GhostRiver 16:16, 9 October 2021 (UTC)Reply