Talk:2007 UAW-Ford 500/GA1
Latest comment: 6 years ago by Kpgjhpjm in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 04:23, 7 August 2018 (UTC)
Let us review this NASCAR article
Lead
edit- Change as the new leader of restrictor plate wins to as the driver with the most restrictor plate wins with twelve
- After the sentence Johnson was still leading as the final lap began add but and remove the full stop .
Background
edit- Add space between Nextel Cup Series and and
- Remove the word and between fifth and Kyle Busch .
- Increased horsepower from 75 to 80 or increase by 75 to 80 .
Practice and Qualifying
edit- Change held the Friday before Sunday's race to held on Friday
- The redlink to 2005 Pocono 500 is not required.
- Change mandated to start 41st and 42nd to mandateed to start at the back . Kpgjhpjm 15:25, 8 August 2018 (UTC)
Race
edit- It is the first mention of McMurray, so change his name to full and link him .
- Remove the words of cars .
- Remove the words a narrow margin
- Change .Hamlin took the lead to and he took the lead
- Johnson was leading on lap 21 , but Hamlin restarted in the lead on lap 22 - Did Johnson make a pit stop.
- lost the first position to lost the lead
- Weird sentence - Stewart moved past Sadler on the 133rd lap after receiving assistance from Stewart. This needs to be fixed .
- Change Then Labonte to Then he
- Petty's left or right rear blew . If there is no information write Petty's tire blew
Post-Race
edit- No issues
Comments
edit- @MWright96: On-Hold for now , when these issues are fixed , I will take a final look . The article is solid , though . Kpgjhpjm 15:31, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
- {reply|Kpgihplm}} Thanks for the review. Everything has been addressed apart from the McMurray query because he is already mentioned and linked in the practice and qualifying sub-section. MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 9 August 2018 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Promoting, thanks for another solid article. But please be more careful with your pings . Kpgjhpjm 03:01, 10 August 2018 (UTC)
- {reply|Kpgihplm}} Thanks for the review. Everything has been addressed apart from the McMurray query because he is already mentioned and linked in the practice and qualifying sub-section. MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 9 August 2018 (UTC)