Talk:2010 São Paulo Indy 300/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 15:57, 6 December 2014 (UTC)

My review is almost complete, but I am unable to finish it at the moment. It will be ready in hopefully a couple of hours. good888 (talk) 15:57, 6 December 2014 (UTC)

Review is now complete. good888 (talk) 10:28, 7 December 2014 (UTC)

Lead section

• "which left him with two broken vertebrae in his back." Link vertebrae.

Practice and qualifying

• Add an image of Dario Franchitti, noting that he took pole position.

Race

• Can you add an image of the crash which occured on the first lap?
• "Minutes before the race start, reports of rain falling on the track caused the start to be delayed, by around ten minutes." Mind if you move the source to the end of this sentence?
• "and much of the field pitting to change from dry-weather tyres to wet-weather ones." Change pitting to pitted.
• "Briscoe's luck would run out" Rewrite to Briscoe's luck would run out however"

Classification

• Add an image of race winner Will Power to this section.

References

• Refs 1, 4 and 30 give a 404 error for me.

Overall, I am happy to promote this article to GA status once these issues are addressed. good888 (talk) 10:28, 7 December 2014 (UTC)

 Done with everything except the refs; they work for me, did you click on the archived version? Anyway, thanks for the review, let me know what else needs to be done, if anything. --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 13:15, 7 December 2014 (UTC)

Both versions did not work at the time, but now they are. Since all issues have been addressed, I will promote this article to GA class. Nice job. good888 (talk) 14:28, 7 December 2014 (UTC)