Talk:2011 Vancouver Stanley Cup riot/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 02:44, 28 February 2024 (UTC)

Review

Brindille1, this is a preliminary review of the small issues I have identified. I will soon delve into references etc. but these are some quick fixes that can be done in the meantime. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 03:09, 28 February 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for picking up this review! I updated the article in response to the notes and responded below. Brindille1 (talk) 03:47, 29 February 2024 (UTC)

Appreciate the feedback on citations- clearly I need to be more attentive to the formatting in the future since I missed a lot. Corrected the ones you pointed out, plus a few more that were incorrectly `cite web` or missing dates. Brindille1 (talk) 04:03, 14 March 2024 (UTC)

Brindille1, passing! Well done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 04:59, 17 March 2024 (UTC)

Previous riots

• Not a major issue and I am fine if it's not fixed, but I was confused originally when you wrote since the 1980s and then mentioned 2006. I see it's because of Montreal (boo Habs!) but I had to re-read to make sense of it. Maybe say: Since the 1980s, Edmonton Oilers and Montreal Canadiens fans have both rioted following Stanley Cup loses. In 2006.....
  • I agree with the concern. I reworded the paragraph and (hopefully) made it read a bit better. - Brindille1 (talk) 03:45, 29 February 2024 (UTC)

Game

• Per MOS:DATESNO, please re-write June 13th, 2011 to June 13, 2011.
  • Somebody beat me to it. If it was you, thanks! - Brindille1 (talk) 03:39, 29 February 2024 (UTC)

Riot

• at which point the police department decides to remove them is in the wrong tense. It should be decided.
  • Fixed - Brindille1 (talk) 03:37, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
• Per MOS:DATESNO, please re-write On June 20th to June 20.
  • You also forgot to add said after Chu
    • Fixed both - Brindille1 (talk) 03:37, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
• caught committing on video to turn is missing a word
  • Fixed - Brindille1 (talk) 03:37, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
• This report labelled alcohol as a primary cause of the riot, stating simply: "Alcohol fuelled the riot." I don't know if the quote is needed here. It doesn't add anything that wasn't already written and seems redundant.
  • Agreed, removed the quote - Brindille1 (talk) 03:37, 29 February 2024 (UTC)

References

• I recommend using IABot [1] and just archiving all the references used in the article.
  • The following references are dead: #2, #7, #30, #35, #36, #38, #53, #58
    • Ref #7, #30, #38, #53 also need to be reformated because it is a newspaper not a website
      • These are now set: #2, #7, #36, #38, #53, Don't see #30 being dead although maybe that's from the bot. #35 is permanently dead, and I removed it since it's not very helpful
  • Ref #3 needs to be re-titled. Right now it says: A tale of two riots Comparing the 1994 and 2011 Stanley Cup riots in Vancouver CBC June 16, 2011 but when you click on the article, it is titled A tale of two riots.
    • Thanks, also fixed the publisher
  • Ref #6 needs to be re-titled. Right now it says: Vancouver police arrest more than 100 in riot Damage to shops and streets to cost millions but when you click on the article, it is titled Vancouver police arrest more than 100 in riot.
    • Fixed
  • Ref #24: doesn't have a publisher (it's CBC News)
    • Added under "work"
  • Ref #26: should be cite news not cite web
    • Done
  • Ref #27: is the same as ref #6. Please merge them
    • done
  • Ref #29: is attributed to the Vancouver Sun but the archived page is to canada.com
    • Replaced with a newspapers.com clipping
  • Ref #32: SportsNet should be Sportsnet. No capital N
    • Fixed
  • Ref #33: needs to be reformated as a newspaper
    • I'm not actually seeing which one is incorrectly formatted- I believe this is fixed though
  • Ref #39: the author of the article isn't the nation of Canada, it's Sunny Dhillon.
    • Done.
  • Ref #40: needs to be reformated as a newspaper
    • Done
  • Ref #41: needs to be re-titled. Right now it says: More than 1M riot photos sent to police - British Columbia - CBC News but when you click on the article, it is titled 1 million riot photos sent to police.
    • Fixed
  • Ref #42: Author is Stephen Hull
    • Fixed
  • Ref #44: the author of the article isn't the nation of Canada, it's Andrea Woo.
    • Fixed
  • Ref #45: needs to be re-titled and given an author. Right now it says: 'Anarchists' not the only rioters: Vancouver police but when you click on the article, it is titled 'Anarchists' not the only rioters: Vancouver police. The author of the article is Bethany Lindsay.
    • Removed, this is covered by #44
  • Ref #47: needs to be re-titled and given an author. Right now it says: Social Media and the 2011 Vancouver Riots ArtsWIRE but when you click on the article, it is titled Social Media and the 2011 Vancouver Riots. The author of the article is Nick Lewis.
    • Fixed
  • Ref #49 needs to be reformated as a newspaper
    • Fixed
  • Ref #50: NEWS 1130 is not the publisher/website. It is City News Vancouver
    • Fixed
  • Ref #57 needs an access date
    • Fixed
  • Ref #61: needs to be reformated as a newspaper
    • I found the original article in newspapers.com and just re-did the citation.
  • Ref #62: it was published in canada.com not Vancouver Sun. Did you try and find the original publication in the Vancouver Sun?
    • For some reason #62 is the same source as #61. Removed.
  • Ref #63: Author is John Zaremba
    • Fixed
  • Ref #64: Author is Anna Jones
    • Fixed
  • Ref #65: Why is NEWS capitalized like that?
    • Fixed
  • Ref #67: needs to be reformated as a newspaper
    • Should be fixed now