Talk:2012 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 21:14, 21 April 2014 (UTC) I will be reviewing this article. On the face of it, it will need some work in order to pass. Please allow a day or two for me to post comments. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:14, 21 April 2014 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   See below

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   See below

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Controversies

• A little embarrassed that a controversy that we started gets so much. You should also add the one about the medal that was taken away after the handicap was re-calculated.

 Done, assuming you mean Mariia Pomazan - Eron^Talk 19:02, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

References

• FN 1 has a raw URL
• FN 2 is broken
• FN 11 is broken
• FN 19 is broken
• FN 21 is broken
• FN 52 has a raw URL (Site also appears to be virus infected)
• FN 57 publisher? access date?
• FN 58 publisher? access date?
• FN 65 has a raw URL
• FN 66 is broken
• FN 92 is broken
• FN 93 is broken

 DoneAll the above references have been reviewed and fixed - Eron^Talk 20:49, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

External links

• First one is broken

 Done - Eron^Talk 18:39, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:21, 22 April 2014 (UTC) ( A few fixes is all we need. Hawkeye7 (talk) 02:57, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

• Three {{citation needed}} tags that need fixing, and we'll be good. Hawkeye7 (talk) 05:11, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

 Done - Eron^Talk 19:16, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

• Passing article. Well done. I note in passing that Sir Phillip Craven's comments about media coverage (in the controversies section) were in response to questions at a press conference from Wikipedia reporters. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:23, 23 April 2014 (UTC)