Talk:2013 Malaysian Grand Prix
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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 05:08, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
Background
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Practice
if inclement weather returned
— What does this mean? In case inclement weather returned? But if so, wasn't it already inclement?- Clarified MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
- So were they afraid of using their wet tires because they had a limited supply, and didn't want to use them up if they might need them later? By the way, what source is used for this part? --Usernameunique (talk) 22:54, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
- No to get used to the conditions in case such conditions returned later that week. Autosport is the source that is being used to verify this information. MWright96 (talk) 04:50, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
- So were they afraid of using their wet tires because they had a limited supply, and didn't want to use them up if they might need them later? By the way, what source is used for this part? --Usernameunique (talk) 22:54, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
- Clarified MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
Qualifying
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After qualifying
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Race
Turn three was flooded, causing several drivers to aquaplane into a gravel trap. Bottas damaged his car's front wing
— Cars were aquaplaning and getting damaged before the race even started?- Yes that did happen MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
Vettel made a pit stop from the lead at the end of that lap
— At the end of what lap?- Clarified MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
- So then is
falling behind Pérez, Sutil and Grosjean in the first third of the lap
on lap five? --Usernameunique (talk) 22:54, 21 May 2020 (UTC)- Lap six MWright96 (talk) 04:50, 22 May 2020 (UTC)
- So then is
- Clarified MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
prevented Sutil from returning to the circuit for 84 seconds. The Force India team retired Sutil
— Did they spend 84 seconds and then give up, or did they spend 84 seconds, he returned to the track, and then they called him back in?- Clarified MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
After the race
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Overall
- MWright96, comments above. --Usernameunique (talk) 05:08, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Usernameunique: Have made changes and have replied where appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 21 May 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96, passing now. --Usernameunique (talk) 00:52, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Usernameunique: Have made changes and have replied where appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 21 May 2020 (UTC)