Talk:2014 Bahrain GP2 Series round
Latest comment: 6 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 02:07, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
- My next little project. Courcelles (talk) 02:07, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
- The language in "run in support of the 2014 Bahrain Grand Prix." is, odd, to my ears. How does one race run in support of a different one?
- It was part of a wider programme for the main event of the weekend. This support race is one of many examples of something that is common in the world of motor racing. I have linked support to Card (sports). MWright96 (talk) 07:25, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
- "Early pace setter Evans felasce the field bettered their times and managed seventh" Something is wrong here.
- "The first race was held over a distance of either 170 kilometres (110 mi) or 60 minutes" and the similar line later, are we talking whichever came first, or when both conditions had been met?
- Clarified. MWright96 (talk) 07:25, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
- "for a virtual fourth place" What's virtual about it?
- Reworded the sentence so it makes sense. MWright96 (talk) 07:25, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
- "drivers were not allowed to make pit stops. " And yet we talk about several pit stops in the Sprint Race. Maybe required is the word you were looking for here?
- Sources and images look fine. On a short hold (mainly so you get the second talk page notification that the review is posted). Courcelles (talk) 03:24, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
- @Courcelles: That should be everything and I hope that I have answered your query to why it was run as part of the 2014 Bahrain Grand Prix. MWright96 (talk) 07:25, 29 April 2018 (UTC)