Talk:2014 Macau Grand Prix/GA1

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:42, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

I'll do this once next. Courcelles (talk) 16:42, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

• "national title contender" What was his finish in the Japanese series?
• "Formula Renault 3.5. Series " Do we need that period after the 5?
• "The 2014 Macau Grand Prix was the 61st running of the event and the 32nd time that the race was held to Formula Three regulations." Source, please?
• "Preparations for the Grand Prix began in July which included the track being repaved during the holiday season and the installation of catch fences." To what "holiday season" are you referring? To my ears, this means "Christmas", and, well, July is not Christmas.
• "For missing red light" Needs an "a" or a "the", not sure which, but definitely one.
• "ultimately held it to the conclusion of practice." -> "ultimately held the lead to the conclusion of practice."
• "clouting the wall at Maternity Bend" Bend is either capitalized or not, right?
• "Blomqvist failed to improved" Improve, lose the "d"
• "by a recover crane" Do you mean "recovery"?
• Days for the Qualifying and Main race sections, please.
• "Rosenqvist attacked Verstappen but the latter fended off his attempts at passing him driving towards Lisboa corner." Too many his and hims here.
• "Auer was aware Rosenqvist would be a problem" Do we have sources discussing his "awareness" or are we assuming?

"the Japanese duo of Kanamaru, Yamashita" Since you're discussing them as a "duo" use and, not a comma.

• Images look good, as does everything else. Courcelles (talk) 17:04, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

@Courcelles: Have taken action on all of your points and i believe that is everything covered. MWright96 (talk) 18:30, 9 May 2018 (UTC)

• Very good work, promoting. Courcelles (talk) 18:44, 9 May 2018 (UTC)