Talk:2014 Monaco GP2 Series round

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 07:03, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

I'll take a look. Courcelles (talk) 07:03, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

"Palmer won the pole position by setting the fastest lap in qualifying but lost his startline advantage" Make explicit this is the feature race.
What date is meant in "One 45-minute practice session was held on Thursday before the two races."
"30-minutes" "45-minutes"? What's with the hyphens?
"Palmer opted for a strategy which had him record his lap midway through qualifying and this clinched him overall pole position with a benchmark lap time of one minute and 20.774 seconds in the final five minutes" Midway... final five minutes? What am I missing here?
"Cecotto worn out his tyres" Do you mean wore?
"#Stoffel Vandoorne (ART Grand Prix) " Stray # sign?
"not allowed to make pit stops." Not allowed, or not required?
"Novelle chicane" You've been capitalizing Chicane everywhere else to not just once... consistency.
"Nasr then sustained a right-rear puncture at Casino Square turn." Might need to be reworded to include the word "tyre"
"The following lap, Markelov carried too much speed going into Sainte Devote corner and dislodged the TecPro barriers at the exit of the turn. Markelov dragged the TecPro barrier along before stopping on the outside line approaching Beau Rivage turn." These two sentences could be rewritten to flow better
"Canamasas had to stop to allow Richelmi back into the lead." He had to stop for the purpose of allowing Richelmu back into the lead, or he had to stop which allowed Richelmi back into the lead? You're currently saying the former, and I think you mean the latter.
"The top three drivers in both races appeared on the podium to collect their trophies and in a later press conference." Single press conference, or one for each race?

That's all from me. Courcelles (talk) 07:32, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

@Courcelles: Have taken action on all the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:37, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

Looks good now, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 17:50, 2 August 2018 (UTC)Reply

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