Talk:2015 Dallas Cowboys season

Latest comment: 9 years ago by Satanhhh in topic Initial Synopsis

The game summaries

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It reads like a 12 year old is writing these game summaries. I edited the last one (Week 5: vs. New England Patriots), take some pointers please. This reads like a terrible Middle School newspaper sports section. Knock off the cheerleading and try to write from a objective PoV. MerrimacVI (talk) 02:01, 14 October 2015 (UTC)Reply


Initial Synopsis

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Perhaps the initial paragraph with synopsis information could be broken down into sections below (such as postseason) to make things a little neater, or is this a bit too organizational. Satanhhh (talk) 06:44, 21 October 2015 (UTC)Reply