Talk:2015 FIA GT World Cup

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Courcelles in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 20:24, 21 May 2018 (UTC)Reply


  • "and was open to any make of car meeting GT3 rules" Do you perhaps mean model here?
  • For the inaugural running of the event, why do we have a defending champion?
  • "The motorsport organisation Stéphane Ratel Organisation (SRO)" Could need a reorganization to not say "organization" twice in five words.
  • "renew its contract with the FIA two years prior" Two years prior to what?
  • " Despite lapping at his pace in the early stages of the race," Lapping? He wasn't lapped, so I'm not sure what you meant here.
  • "At midpoint in the race," At the midpoint, or "At the race's midpoint, I would think?
  • " latter's car lodged onto his left rear tyre." His is ambiguous here.
  • I made three small edits as I went, please check them.

Courcelles (talk) 18:43, 22 May 2018 (UTC)Reply