Talk:2016 Austrian Grand Prix
Latest comment: 8 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:24, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
Will have a look at this. MWright96 (talk) 14:24, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate
use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate
use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
- no dab links
Lead
edit- "and marks the thirtieth running of the Austrian Grand Prix" - Marked since the race was held in the past
- Remove the link to Austria in the prose and infobox
Championship
edit- Wikilink both the Drivers' and Constructors' Championships
Circuit changes
edit- Spell out the FIA in full
Free practice
edit- "with Vettel and Kimi Räikkönen third and fourth respectively" - a comma is needed at the end of this sentence
- Delink Max Verstappen since he's already link in the circuit changes sub-section
- Link gravel trap to Run-off area
- Link intermediate tyres to Rain tyre
- Fernando Alonso is not linked
Qualifying
edit- Delink Nico Hülkenberg, Romain Grosjean
- Spell out Bottas as Valteeri Bottas since it is the first time he is mentioned and add a wikilink
- Same for Felipe Massa
Race
edit- All mentions of the word "pitted" should be "made a pit stop" to reduce motorsport jargon
Post-race
edit- "Their head of motorsport," - I think director of motorsport would be better
- Captialise constructors'
- "on now 295 to 192 points." - swap the words "now" and "on"
Classification (Qualifying)
edit- The fourth note has a citation needed tag
References
edit- no dead links. However it states the three Associated Press sources are "expiring news links". Can they be archived?
On hold until the points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 16:03, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thank you for your review! Unfortunately, I did not get around to deal with all points so far and I will fly to Hungary tomorrow, where I'll have no internet. Could you leave this review open until, say, the 26th? Zwerg Nase (talk) 19:14, 16 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Zwerg Nase: Yes, I can do that. :) MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 16 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: I'm afraid I'll need the weekend as well, I am swamped right now... Zwerg Nase (talk) 20:55, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Zwerg Nase: Very well. MWright96 (talk) 20:57, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thank you for your patience! I took care of everything now except for capitalizing "constructors'". The reason behind that is while Drivers' Championship is a set term and therefore in capital letters, the equivalent with "standings" is not. Does that make sense? Zwerg Nase (talk) 08:28, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Zwerg Nase:. I understand. Not a serious issue but can now promote this to GA. MWright96 (talk) 08:36, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thank you for your patience! I took care of everything now except for capitalizing "constructors'". The reason behind that is while Drivers' Championship is a set term and therefore in capital letters, the equivalent with "standings" is not. Does that make sense? Zwerg Nase (talk) 08:28, 28 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Zwerg Nase: Very well. MWright96 (talk) 20:57, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: I'm afraid I'll need the weekend as well, I am swamped right now... Zwerg Nase (talk) 20:55, 26 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Zwerg Nase: Yes, I can do that. :) MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 16 August 2016 (UTC)