Talk:2016 Gent–Wevelgem/GA1

Latest comment: 8 years ago by Zwerg Nase in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Zwerg Nase (talk · contribs) 10:27, 2 May 2016 (UTC)Reply


I will review this. Zwerg Nase (talk) 10:27, 2 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Also just some minor aspects here:

  • Pre-race favourites: Just calling Boasson Hagen "champion" is confusing, since it doesn't make it clear champion of what he is or was. I would prefer "Boasson Hagen, who had won the 2009 edition of the race". Thereby, the reader does not need to follow any wikilink to find out what is behind it. Also, I would rather call Paolini "winner", not "champion" of 2015, since the race is not a championship.

Other than that, I have actually nothing that needs changing. Thank you for a very good article! I was especially happy to see that you managed to include Demoitié's death in a very respectful fashion. Very good work! On hold for just those two little things mentioned above. Zwerg Nase (talk) 10:53, 12 May 2016 (UTC)Reply

Both are done. Wizardman 14:38, 22 May 2016 (UTC)Reply
Thanks! Now GA. Zwerg Nase (talk) 16:40, 22 May 2016 (UTC)Reply