Talk:2016 Long Beach ePrix

Latest comment: 5 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:2016 Long Beach ePrix/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 16:32, 10 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Will also review this article. Kpgjhpjm 16:32, 10 December 2018 (UTC)Reply

Lead

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  • held before a crowd of 17,000 spectators on April 2, 2016 --> {{xt|held on April 2, 2016 before a crowd of 17,000 spectators.
  • fastest driver of qualifying --> fastest driver in qualifying .
  • Make the words consistent - either write di Grassi or Di Grassi.

Background

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  • No issues

Practice and qualifying

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  • winner of the Long Beach Grand Prix - Link Long Beach Grand Prix.
  • in the 2011 event and the 2014 race - in 2011 and in 2014 .
  • that Virgin's Jean-Éric Vergne bettered - that was bettered by Virgin's Jean -Éric Vergne.
  • As with the first session, practice --> As with the first session, the second session of free practice .
  • accelerator pedal as lost a large amount of grip entering the first turn Did you mean and lost ?

Race

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  • from earlier in the event --> from the incident earlier in the event .
  • cosmetic damage to his car - What is cosmetic damage ?

Post-race

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  • No issues

Classification

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  • Why the names of some drivers are in bold ?

Comments

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