Talk:2016 Marrakesh ePrix
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Bcschneider53 (talk · contribs) 00:31, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
It's unbelievable an editor of your credentials has had to wait so long for a review. I'll take this on. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 00:31, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Is there a more descriptive weather report than "sunny" that could be used for the infobox?
- The air and track track temperatures have been included. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
- "The 33-lap race was won by e.Dams-Renault driver Sébastien Buemi who started from the seventh position." Comma between Buemi and who.
Background
edit- "Nelson Piquet Jr. felt it would a fast circuit" I assume you mean "would be"?
- Yes. Grammar change done MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
Practice and qualifying
edit- "The full course yellow was necessiated" Should "yellow" be changed to something like caution or safety car? Also, "necessitated".
- I have amended to say full course yellow flag; the series does not use the word caution. Done typo fix MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
- "The driver who recorded the fastest time was awarded three points towards both championships." I suggest rewriting this to "The driver and team who recorded the fastest time were awarded three points towards their respective championships."
- Reworded MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
- "the five drivers to qualify for the super pole round." Should "Super Pole" be capitalized as it is earlier in the section when it is first mentioned?
Post-race
edit- "saying both his vehicles were "amazing" and cars' balance was "really good"." An inline citation is required here for the quotes; I assume it is the "Driver Debrief" ref?
- Yes. Have now clarified. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
Classification
edit- Are the italics necessary in the qualification table for the top five? I don't recall it being italicized in the previous Formula E article I reviewed...
- Italics have been removed MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
- So now it seems superpole is one word, with a linked article. If that's the case, link it on its first appearance and keep it as one word throughout.
Done. Just of note, after checking, superpole is two words instead of one. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
- If points scorers are in bold, Loïc Duval's 18th place row should be in bold as well.
As usual, simple fixes. Placing on hold. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 01:08, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
- @Bcschneider53: Thank you for the review. All of the points raised have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 06:32, 14 May 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you for your quick responses. Pass for GA. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 11:40, 14 May 2017 (UTC)