Talk:2017 Bangkok United F.C. season

Latest comment: 6 years ago by Reidgreg in topic March 2018 copy edit

March 2018 copy edit

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  • Would prefer to see more information in prose, such as a short text summary of the season. Similarly, the lead gives an introduction to the article rather than a summary, with no citations.
  • I feel there is gross overuse of flag icons. Please see MOS:FLAG. I removed the flags from the infobox MOS:INFOBOXFLAG which were particularly egregious. (You wouldn't put a flag for the nationality of the CEO and executives of a company, would you?)
  • I abbreviated some of the dates to tighten-up the spacing of the tables.
  • MOS discourages using an apostrophe as shorthand for distances in feet, as this is not universally understood. It seems like that information is tending toward trivia, though, and with no citations perhaps it should be removed altogether?

Short copy edit, so felt I should give some feedback. – Reidgreg (talk) 15:45, 11 March 2018 (UTC)Reply