Talk:2019 European Pool Championship

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:25, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:25, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• Italy does not need to be linked in the first infobox per MOS:OVERLINK
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
• The flagicons on the majority of the champions are the wrong ones
  • Flags removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
• Jasmine Ouschan should be spelt as Jasmin Ouschan
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• "was a series of professional pool championships that took place at the Best Western Premier in Treviso, Italy. The event was played between 26 April and 8 May 2019." - Think these two sentences can be merged into one and made less wordy in the process, particularly the second sentence
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:56, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
• "The series most medals were won by Russian players," - Russian players won the most medals over the course of the series,
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:56, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

Overview

• "annual series of pool tournaments for players in Europe, first held in 1980" - which were first held
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:07, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "125 points in the men's event, and 75 in the women's event." - try to avoid close repetition of the word "event"
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:07, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• mentions of "race-to-xx" should have the en dash replacing the dashes
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:07, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "as race=to-6 racks" - the stray equals sign needs to be removed
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:07, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Tournament summary

• "to complete an all Polish final." - all-Polish
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "Skowerski won his first individual European championship by defeating Skowerski" - you mean Skowerski defeated Skoneczny?
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "whilst Netherlands' Tamara Peeters-Rademakers" - the Netherlands'
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "and featured over" - more than
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "100 participants in the men's, and 40 for the women's division." - AZBillards state that 101 male participants and 43 women players entered the ten-ball event
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "defeating Latvian player Kaspars Turks in the final 6–1." - 6–1 in the final.
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "The eight-ball event began on the 2 May." - The eight-ball competition commenced on 2 May.
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "World Pool-Billiard Association world number 1 player Eklent Kaçi and Ralf Souquet" - AZBilliards does not mention that Kaci was the WPBA world number 1
  • Removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "Kaçi won rack 14 to win his first championship" - repetition of the word won/win
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "where she met Jasmine Ouschan." - Jasmin
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• Please avoid using Jasmin Ouschan's first name and use her surname instead
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "defeating Roy Kimberley 5–2 to win his 25th European medal." - European gold medal.
  • It wasn't his 25th gold. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "The Portuguese team of Vania Franco and Sara Rocha reached the final without losing a match, where they met the German team" - repetition of the word "team"
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "Russian player Fedor Gorst played 2018 WPA World Nine-ball Championship winner Joshua Filler" - No mention of Filler being the 2019 WPA World Nine-Ball championship by AZBillards
  • Removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• "with Filler's break shot being dry on most occasions." - not to sure what is meant by the phrase "being dry". Either reword it or wikilink it
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:17, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Medals title

• "having won three events and winning seven medals." - reeptition of the word won/winning
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:57, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
• "with seven titles, but only two event wins." - and two event victories.
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:57, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

References

• To keep it short, all of those references that mention their respective authors and publication dates should be added in
  •  Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:34, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
• Reference 11 is dead and will need to be archived or replaced
  • Yeah, the EPBF recently stripped all match results from all competitions online. It's beyond frustrating. I have replaced with something suitable. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:34, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

Overall the main issues concern the prose, the lack of some information in the formatting of the refereces, and some information not being verified by the existing sources. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 19:49, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Sure, MWright. This all looks doable, I will get to this. I'm on a slight wikibreak during the pandemic, so please bare with me if I'm a little slow at commenting on these points. :) Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 10:19, 30 March 2020 (UTC)

MWright96 - I have covered the above. Thanks for your patients. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:34, 3 April 2020 (UTC)

@Lee Vilenski: NP. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 07:13, 4 April 2020 (UTC)