Talk:2019 UK Seniors Championship/GA1

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

---

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 21:10, 12 October 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
· · ·

Just some copy tweaks, really. Hold to Lee Vilenski. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 21:41, 12 October 2022 (UTC)

Copy changes

• The UK Seniors Championship is an amateur snooker tournament first held in 2019. Looks like this should read 2017?
• The winner of the 2018 UK Seniors Championship, Ken Doherty did not appear at the event. Complete the appositive by adding a comma after Doherty
• The oldest man in the field, Cliff Thorburn Same. In the same sentence, remove the comma before "but" (User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences.
• His opponent, Patrick Wallace, however A lot of kludgy commas here but can't avoid them. Perhaps However, his opponent, Patrick Wallace,
• Michael Judge defeated Willie Thorne also on a deciding frame Comma after Thorne
• The final quarter-final Judge defeated James Wattana 3–1 I presume a missing "In" needs to be added to the front.
• After the match, Judge called White his "hero" and winning the event was "a dream come true". a missing "said" before "winning"
• The results from the event is shown below, players in bold denote match winners. Change "is" to "are" and the comma to a semicolon.
  • All done. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 07:40, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Spot checks

Earwig turns up no issues. I do note Ref 3 could use more metadata.

• [4] (snooker.org): Most things check out, but I don't see Jimmy White's 104 here. It is mentioned in [11], though, so it's a matter of adding another citation. Why is this ref listed as being in Norwegian?
  • It's also in 13, which is cited there. I've removed the Lang parameter. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 07:42, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
• [9]: Match information is provided.

I take it the dead link at [7] is unavoidable?

• • Fraid so, I can't find it anywhere online. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 07:43, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Other items

• Archive references.
• The one image is freely licensed and has alt text.
  • Hi Sammi Brie, I've replied to the above. Thanks for your review. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 07:44, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.