Talk:2019 World Athletics Championships – Women's marathon/GA1
Latest comment: 4 years ago by BennyOnTheLoose in topic Comments
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Reviewer: BennyOnTheLoose (talk · contribs) 12:08, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Checked all results above 4% match on Earwig's Copyvio tool - no concerns.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
editI'm happy to discuss or be challenged on any of my comments.
- Suggest using IA bot or a similar tool to prevent WP:LINKROT
- Consider adding a short description (WP:SHORTDESC) if a useful one is possible. It looks like some other GAs on similar topics don't have one.
- Added, not sure how useful it is. Harrias talk 08:15, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
- Lead / Preview: "six laps of a 7-kilometre (4.3 mi) floodlit course" doesn't quite make the marathon distance. I suggest either confirming the "exact" route distance or adding in a qualifier along the lines of "approximately"
- Made a little vaguer. Harrias talk 08:15, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
- Preview: "considered the favourites" - consider adding "to win." I'm not sure how widely understood favourite in the betting sense is, but there must be a small possibility of confusion with favourite.
- Added. Harrias talk 08:15, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
- Preview: "Entrants highlighted from other countries.." - true, but the highlight is in a particular IAAF article. Could perhaps be reworded as something like "Other competitors included Lonah Salpeter of Israel [something about Euro 10,000] and Helalia Johannes of Namibia [something about Commonwealth title]."
- Tweaked similar to suggestion. Harrias talk 08:15, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
- Summary: "The race was officially scheduled to start at 23:59 local time.." - consider reword to show that it did start at that (scheduled) time, which I don't think is explicit at the moment. (On the other hand, there is nothing that says it did not start at that time.)
- I've intentionally avoided this: while some sources say it started at 23:59, some say that it started "on the stroke of midnight". Harrias talk 08:15, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
- OK, makes sense. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 10:25, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
- Source 1 (IAAF qualifying) (Note: For some reason the link on the article page didn't work for me - I found the article via Google, and the link seems to be as per citation)
- Source 2 (IAAF qualifying system)
- Source 3 (Kelly)
- Source 4 (Rehmat)
- Source 5 (Bloom)
- Source 6 (Cacciola)
- Source 7 (Rowbottom) (Note: IAAF changed its name to World Athletics after the Doha event)
- Source 8 (British Athletics)
- Source 9 (Gabelić)
- Source 10 (IAAF records) - additional citation needed for "not expected that any records would be set"
- Source 11 (IAAF)
- Source 12 (Al Jazeera)
- Source 13 (Keating)
- Source 14 (Chowdhury)
- Source 15 (Tress)
- Source 16 (Bloom 2)
- Source 17 (IAAF - 50km)
- Source 18 (IAAF Results)
Harrias Thanks for your work on this interesting article. I've made a few suggestions, and am always happy to engage in discussion. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 22:11, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
- @BennyOnTheLoose: Cheers for the review. I think I've wrapped up these points now; any further input would be greatly appreciated. Harrias talk 13:34, 4 May 2020 (UTC)
- @Harrias: Thanks for your responses. I'm happy to pass this for GA. I'd still be in favour of running IA bot or another archiving tool, but that's not a necessity. I made a couple of further minor changes to the preview section but would have no objections to these being reverted or amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 17:20, 4 May 2020 (UTC)