Talk:2020 Atlantic hurricane season/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by 12george1 in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink mobile (talk · contribs) 01:54, 11 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • "An early estimate from La Prensa placed damage and losses in Honduras from Eta and Iota as high as $10 billion – roughly 40 percent of that nation's GDP." - since that was in December, try finding a more recent estimate.
  • "There were no reports of casualties or damage associated with the storm." - usually we don't include this
  • "In its early stages, Sally dropped heavy rainfall in South Florida, causing street flooding. However, in Key West, up to 6 in (150 mm) of water was reported in some businesses and homes." - why the "however"?
  • "However, there were no reports of damage or fatalities directly caused by Vicky."
  • Is it worth mentioning that Gamma was absorbed by Delta?
  • "The city was left "underwater"" - can you rewrite so you don't have an unattributed quote?
  • "The hurricane caused one indirect death; a 27-year-old man drowned in Epsilon-induced rip currents in Daytona Beach, Florida." - why was this indirect?
  • Make sure you add a source for Zeta being the latest MH in the US

All in all, a very good job on such an important season! It shouldn't take much to get it to GA. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:29, 11 August 2021 (UTC)Reply